Friday, January 1, 2010

Connie Lee - Autobiographical Writing

To tell the truth I never really thought much about my name other than not liking how common it was. I have a common first name and common last name, and it’s not even one of those really nice sounding common names like Sophie or Claire. Oh well, it was a name, my name, and I used it as long as I could get by. It was not until we had to do an individual project in chemistry class one year did I really think about whether I liked my name or not. Each of us was assigned an element from the periodic table and we had to make a poster introducing our element. The first students assigned to an element were the ones that had initials that stood for an element. Surprisingly, our grade happened to have a lot of these names. We had Alex Girkin, Ag for silver, Pedro Botas, Pb for lead, Nisha Emich, Ne for Neon… and even more surprisingly I was one of these people, Cl for chlorine. I never knew my name had such a connection to chemistry. Actually I didn’t really know what chlorine was, because we didn’t learn anything about the elements yet, so I went ahead and looked it up. After some research I was not so please to find out that chlorine was actually a disgusting smelling green poisonous gas used to clean swimming pools. Others people’s names stood for shiny metals or cool glowing stuff and mine stood for a green poisonous gas. So adding this to not really liking how common my name was, there was a time where I just did not like my name that much. But now I don’t really mind anymore; and if you look on the bright side, I don’t think it would be pleasant to jump into a pool without chlorine anyway, right?

3 comments:

  1. Hello, Connie babe,
    haha, this is a funny essay, I like it. Oh! My favorite line is "I was not so please to find out that chlorine was actually a disgusting smelling green poisonous gas used to clean swimming pools." Especially the disguesting smelling green poisonous part, it sounds like gum. Except we dont use gum to clean swimming pools^_^ Um...just a suggestion, maybe u can change this sentence into a more positive tone. "Oh well, it was a name, my name, and I used it as long as I could get by. " It sounds like you hate your name== Oh well, but I still love ur essay. Unfortunately, there is no element call Vc right?! (too bad, Viki Chen can't find one too, haha) maybe you can creat one for me that is not use for cleaning the swimming pool==

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  2. hahaha...

    connie...it's Warnecke...i assigned that project for you.

    hope you are well, honestly, Prague hasn't been the same since you left.

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  3. Kathy to Connie:

    I like the line "I don’t think it would be pleasant to jump into a pool without chlorine anyway, right?" It makes the ending of your essay really funny and leaves an imprint in the reader's mind.
    One suggestion, when you say "So adding this to not really liking how common my name was,there was a time where I just did not like my name that much.", it's a bit repetitive.
    Maybe you could have said "So adding to this, there was a time where I just did not like my name."
    Your essay was really funny though! I don't think my initials are in the periodic table! ;D

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