Life
Life, people all wonder, especially us, teenagers. People usually don’t know what life is all about; actually people know nothing about it. Yet, people still live and continue their own life. Every single life, there’s always happiness, sadness, joyfulness, anger, jealousy, and more. Everybody must have confusions and sentimental problems; some people can survive and solve the problems, but not everyone. There’s also the time where you have nothing left around you, no money, no job, no house, or no family. That’s the worst thing that could ever happen to any one of us. But really, what if you became like that? Should you just give up and just end you life like that, with nothing? Or should you just keep on living and do nothing about it? The answer to both of the problems are no. I, myself, have some problems too, my future college, academics, my personal problems about me and my family, and more that I can’t talk about. Sometimes, I just wish I could just die and sleep forever peacefully and forgetting about all those problems. But then, I wonder, if I really did die then what would happen to all the great things that happen to me? Family, friends, love, support, and my dream will fade away with me and disappear forever too. Also I realized that I’m just running away from my own problems. I should stand up and continue my own life and I know that one day I can solve all of my problems. Now I know that life is not just living every single day, but to make every single day and moment memorial and lasting. Teenage life, for us it’s like everything around us is shattering and getting worse then ever, but it’s only the start of your own life.
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hi kimi
ReplyDeleteyou still have much to learn. however, i'm really pleased that you gave such a response to a problem like this. there's more to face, but i think you can take them all with this effort.
"People usually don’t know what life is all about; actually people know nothing about it. Yet, people still live and continue their own life." when i see this sentence i laughed, because i really know what life is all about. (no offense) that's why i'm pleased with your response.
one sentence that i need o change, "Teenage life, for us it’s like everything around us is shattering and getting worse then ever, but it’s only the start of your own life." take a look at "worse than ever"if that is what you mean, and you might want to say, "start of my life."
overall, this is a life explaining essay, the usage a the tone can tell that it was a very troubling problem to you. then in the end, with the problem resolved, you seemed kind of proud of yourself when you finish the essay.
glhf
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Kevin Lin
ReplyDelete"But really, what if you became like that? Should you just give up and just end you life like that, with nothing? Or should you just keep on living and do nothing about it?"
Very deep, and good use of questions.
"Sometimes, I just wish I could just die and sleep forever peacefully and forgetting about all those problems."
"Forgetting" to "forget". Plus, don't do that. :D
This is the deepest thing I have read this year so far. Very true, very educational, and very inspirational, maybe this essay can even be on par with Ted Linghu's Fb New Year Resolution Note ;). Jk, but anyways nice essay. Your last sentence was very good too.
Kimi I agree with you with all my heart. I have no idea why I am alive, people question about it but are unable to answer these questions. Why? Why do we live? What is the meaning of life? But noone hase answered these questions yet. "Sometimes, I just wish I could just die and sleep forever peacefully and forgetting about all those problems." I too have this problem, and I love this quote. I don't know why i am alive. Also great job on the essay XD!
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